I Wrote A Creepypasta (AGAIN)

[McLeod]

So for the past few days I've been working on this really short story and I thought you guys might enjoy a read through, it's a sequel to a story I did a while back which can be read here (http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/The_Willow_Creature?cb=8725) but you don't need to read that to enjoy this one.

 

This is a Smacktalks first too, hasn't been anywhere else yet.

 

 

Edited November 27, 2014 by McLeod

[jitz]

Nice Slender Man fanfic, you going to tackle an original story next?

Edited November 27, 2014 by jitz

[McLeod]

Nice Slender Man fanfic, you going to tackle an original story next?

Nice dick-move, you going to tackle being a decent person next?

[jitz]

Brutal honesty is rare in the creative world, don't shy away from it. You can write, but you write while uninspired and so you write about things you've seen recently. You should read some Hunter S Thompson novels, the single greatest first person writer. Never uninspired, always embellished to fullest.

Or be a terrible fanfic writer that no one reads, your choice.

[fufu ÷]

Very disappointed that you wrote "and when I woke up, I realised it was all a dream." at the end.

[McLeod]

Well Jitz if you're going to be brutally honest, it would be nice if you were straight forward too.

And fufu, fuck off

[fufu ÷]

Pro tips: If you want to spice up your writing, make sure you and lots of exclamation marks! The more the better! And if you want to really build up a tension, use as many ellipsis as you can... they'll really... SPOOK YOUR WORK UP!

[McLeod]

Pro tips: If you want to spice up your writing, make sure you and lots of exclamation marks! The more the better! And if you want to really build up a tension, use as many ellipsis as you can... they'll really... SPOOK YOUR WORK UP!

There's only 4 exclamation marks and 2 ellipsis. 

[fufu ÷]

And that is why you fail.

[McLeod]

And this is why you disappointment me fufu, nothing you say is genuine. You're not a real person you're just an internet thing.

[fufu ÷]

[McLeod]

Also I'm into the last 25 minutes of my HEYAYAYAYA 10 hour run on ST bo peep bo peep by the way.

[fufu ÷]

wanna bet that you wont see the end of that ten hours?

[McLeod]

I did, the video is 10:25:00.

[fufu ÷]

You didn't, because I skipped it with 21 minutes to go.

[McLeod]

So the video ran over 10 hours, so I did 10 hours, where the video is 10:25:00.