My first render attempt

[IamCrazyPT]

Hi everybody.Today i decide to try to make a render.

This is my first try.

Want to know what do you think that i should edit to make him better

 

 

 

[Samy]

Looks good but some spots should be lighter

[Darth 6am3r]

I feel like you used too much blur by easily seeing his eyes.

[IamCrazyPT]

I feel like you used too much blur by easily seeing his eyes.

ok thanks for the advise

[Darth 6am3r]

 

I feel like you used too much blur by easily seeing his eyes.

ok thanks for the advise

 

Its Advice lol.

[Judders]

From what I'm looking at, I think you've over sharpened it. Also it's too dark, try playing with the curves to make it lighter, but not lose some of the detailing.