xKK3 Posted June 23, 2013 Posted June 23, 2013 (edited) I DON'T WANNA GET THIS TOPIC LOCKED TOO, DO I!? Alright, l started on AJ Lee when she won the Divas Title. l only have her face now, in which nogoodRAIDA helped with his WWE '12 AJ Lee. So here it is: UPDATED, PLEASE COMPARE THEM & COMMENT. BEFORE AND AFTER Edited June 24, 2013 by xKK3 Quote
NICO4 Posted June 23, 2013 Posted June 23, 2013 Head needs shortened still. Lips need thinned. Jaw need to be longer. Eyes, rotate them the tiniest bit less. Nose looks great though, want me to make a PT bang for her? ;o Quote
xKK3 Posted June 23, 2013 Author Posted June 23, 2013 Nuu, her lips are big, l was reffering to Nico! xD Quote
IceShimmer x Posted June 23, 2013 Posted June 23, 2013 Oh!! Sorry! Maybe Reduce the thickness and width?? Quote
xKK3 Posted June 23, 2013 Author Posted June 23, 2013 Oh!! Sorry! Maybe Reduce the thickness and width?? Yes l will, as soon as l get on PSN!! Quote
Insatiable Crazy Chick♥☠ Posted June 23, 2013 Posted June 23, 2013 I still like it xD It just needs attires <.< Quote
NICO4 Posted June 23, 2013 Posted June 23, 2013 lt's the angle of the pic. ..."Angle" Ok.. I'll hopefully see her in game soon and give you a better review then. Quote
Deleted Member Posted June 24, 2013 Posted June 24, 2013 Couple of Points here: #1. Your last topic got closed due to the flame war that proceeded the last few topic replies. #2. Nobody on this forum is anything but helpful with their replies but you need to try and accept their constructive criticism for just that " Constructive " Nobody is trying to attack you but rather give you their honest opinions so that you have the best quality AJ Lee Caw as possible. Until you can accept the criticism and so forth you're not going to be able to get anywhere as a caw maker. And You can choose to accept this or not but at current if you hosted this on Community Creations without taking time to listen to the Better caw makers who've been cawing for years You're going to have the actual gaming community on PSN shred this as it's currently sub par and could be a whole lot better if you listen to your fellow cawers here like Stingertap, Technokev, and the countless others in your previous topic that you just ignored. They've been cawing way way longer and they're feedback and tips etc etc etc are really what you and the younger caw makers need to listen to and not so much as your friends just blowing smoke about how great something is when it's really not. Now for suggestions: Right now I still think the head on this AJ looks awful at the moment. and I don't care for her eye morphing right now either..... I think the eyes need to be totally re done atm and the head size is still way too much This has great potential but not if you aren't willing to listen to the regulars and make the necessary changes. Hope you consider that long and hard Quote
xKK3 Posted June 24, 2013 Author Posted June 24, 2013 (edited) Couple of Points here: #1. Your last topic got closed due to the flame war that proceeded the last few topic replies. #2. Nobody on this forum is anything but helpful with their replies but you need to try and accept their constructive criticism for just that " Constructive " Nobody is trying to attack you but rather give you their honest opinions so that you have the best quality AJ Lee Caw as possible. Until you can accept the criticism and so forth you're not going to be able to get anywhere as a caw maker. And You can choose to accept this or not but at current if you hosted this on Community Creations without taking time to listen to the Better caw makers who've been cawing for years You're going to have the actual gaming community on PSN tear it apart .... Now for suggestions: Right now I still think the head on this AJ looks awful at the moment. The sizing overall looks bad. and I don't particularly care for the eye morph either. I'll be back later with more suggestions and references of her for you to work from... and I hope you actually listen to everybody's suggestions and reviews here as if you did that you'd have a killer caw of her. In-game, she looks just like the AJ Lee from the DLC, blame the pic! l need someone to get a good ref from her. Someone please!? Edited June 24, 2013 by xKK3 Quote
ObsessedW/divas Posted June 24, 2013 Posted June 24, 2013 (edited) This is what I think could use work: Lips: Reduce size and width Cranium: Way too high Eyes: Angle down some and reduce height Nose: I would bring in the nostril width I would also try playing with the designs on the forehead to show the most amount of skin. Is this textured? Edited June 24, 2013 by ObsessedW/divas Quote
xKK3 Posted June 24, 2013 Author Posted June 24, 2013 This is what I think could use work: Lips: Reduce size and width Cranium: Way too high Eyes: Angle down some and reduce height Nose: I would bring in the nostril width I would also try playing with the designs on the forehead to show the most amount of skin. I will work on that & l don't exactly understand about the "to show the most amount of skin"? Quote
ObsessedW/divas Posted June 24, 2013 Posted June 24, 2013 I will work on that & l don't exactly understand about the "to show the most amount of skin"? Look in your sig picture there is very little hair on her forehead... try to make the bangs not cover so much of her forehead Quote
xKK3 Posted June 24, 2013 Author Posted June 24, 2013 Look in your sig picture there is very little hair on her forehead... try to make the bangs not cover so much of her forehead Oh, xD Okayy, l'll try!! Quote
NWOldskool Posted June 24, 2013 Posted June 24, 2013 Still applies! Judging by this ref I'd lower the jaw height as it's too high up and decrease the jaw width while adding some upperline as well. Lower the mouth and decrease the thickness and add some with. Decrease the cranium size a bunch, decrease the eye size and height, widen them and move them further apart. I don't know if you textured her, but those brows are WAY too thick so make them thinner. Decrease the nose height and angle as well as adding some nostril height and decrease the cheek size. Overall it isn't too bad I am sure with more work it'll look more like her. Quote
Deleted Member Posted June 24, 2013 Posted June 24, 2013 DLC AJ Lee Right now it looks like the brows are much too thick based off these vs. your current previews as well. Quote
Guest Stingertap10 Posted June 24, 2013 Posted June 24, 2013 xKK3 You wanna see how an AJ is supposed to look: Vancheta's AJ Lee: Quote
SimplyCreations99 Posted June 24, 2013 Posted June 24, 2013 xKK3 You wanna see how an AJ is supposed to look: Vancheta's AJ Lee: Although this AJ looks good, I think that the eyes are off. They look too slanted. But I agree, Kattie, this would be a good model to take note from! Quote
Deleted Member Posted June 24, 2013 Posted June 24, 2013 ^ the eyes aren't slanted here but rather it's an after effect of the caw moving during the time it was captured....it happens quite frequently on doing caw previews.....But I agree totally that this is an ideal AJ lee likeness so try and work yours so it looks a bit better on the suggestions left previously. Not to sound redundant but the cranium is just killing things right now for a lot of the people offering real criticism / honest feedback so once you nail that down the rest will come together as well. It has great potential but right now it needs a little tlc to fix a few things. Quote
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