Script rough draft review/proof/opinion/help

[sir-up]

I've made a few posts so far about a storyline I'm working on, but I'd like to get some feedback as I'm heavily editing it already, and am too much of a perfectionist for my own good, and I don’t have any friends that are wrestling / video game wrestling fans, and don’t know anything about the actual product. I would like to get some feedback if anyone is willing to take the time and volunteer their services I would greatly appreciate it. Just PM, or comment here if you are interested, and I will send the first part to you through whatever means you feel comfortable with. This would just be the first part of my script for story designer in MS Word DOCX format, and not an actual CC. This will be uploaded on XBL btw, but wouldn’t mind anyone that owns a PS3 for help. Thanks in advance!

[Free Spirittt]

I'm all for this man. I usually spend 95% of my time on WWE 13 creating story's. It's too fun and I love playing and critiquing other people's story's as well. My gamer tag is my profile name so you know.

[sir-up]

I'm all for this man. I usually spend 95% of my time on WWE 13 creating story's. It's too fun and I love playing and critiquing other people's story's as well. My gamer tag is my profile name so you know.

Thanks let me clean it up some more, and i'll send it your way.. Are you on wii only or do you have a 360?