My photographic genius.

[Jonny]

I uploaded 42 new images yesterday.

Proper critique, please.

http://jj04.deviantart.com/

[Nemo]

lmfao @ "You must be Sal...."

your pictures are pretty. go fuck yourself.

[Smacktalks]

There pretty good, nice work.

My mates just been showing me his stuff and talked me into buying his old camera so I might actually signup and add some stuff.. one day.

[Chillalex]

Nice stuff johnny

Liked your colour images more; B&W does not a good photo make though you don't need me to tell you that.

I don't so much like conceptual pieces with obscure names really, despite what I've done in the past. I just think I could just as easily take a POV shot of my view when Im takin a whizz and call it "the endless struggle", its this kind of afterthought imbuement of concept that photography/DA.com falls foul to all too often. But formally they are nice, and I've saved that large panorama one.

My one thing I would bring up, is perhaps a bit more attention to composition. Sometimes it's a little too straightforward, bam, center, parallel camera. Thats all though, and there are times when you've got some nice compositions. To that end, I'll remind you that white space is a great friend, and the golden ratio is something to always keep in mind even for mundane shots.

I don't know if its just a bad run or something, but your architecture and scenery shots are so much more stronger than any with characters in.

Oh and on a personal note, the Rooftop panoramic... this just feels like it could have more thought put in to the colours. Iono, its a nice photo atm, nice layout as panoramics often are, but something about screams to me that it wants a graphic use of colours. Maybe I'll do a paintover if im not so busy.

Dont take any of this as a knock at your work and bashing, as by and large I do like it

Edited March 21, 2008 by Chillalex

[Jonny]

Thanks for the feedback, guys.

Yeah, I totally agree with you Alex. The only reason I had gave my pictures captions (which I don't like doing and see no point in.) is because DA forces you to title your work. Also, I didn't want to leave it as Pict0020. I agree I'm not the best with capturing characters, but I'm working on it.